Your other submission
Hey, I just saw your other submission that just got blammed. It wasn't bad, but I didn't have time to review it so i'll do it here. The first thing you need to do (in the kirby sprite animation) is make the hitbox for the text buttons bigger. It's too hard to try and click the actual text as a button to continue. It's very easy to make the hitbox bigger. There alot of good websites to learn from, like flashkit .com As long as you keep trying you'll get alot better, and learn alot of tricks. You can email me if you want help.
Don't ever give up. Ever.
Thanks for reviewing the other one. As I wrote on there, I just started recently.
I'll have something better posted in the future.
Awsome game, alot of bugs
Me > J00
MUNGLAR > ME > J00
OK, i thought this was an awsome game, but the only thing i wanted to comment on was while reading the instructions you said "your now in the second dimension" , but we are in 4th dimensions right now, so it should really be the 5th dimension that this game takes place in. or really the 5th, 6th, 7th, and 8th..... but 2nd is fine :)
How'd ya do it...
I thought it was awsome, so you wouldnt be thinking of releasing the source, would ya?
I agree with Slim_JT, it was like pacman on drugs
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